Between two chords

The following is an extract from “A turgid stem.”

 http://gentledove2.wordpress.com/the-turgid-stem

 

Linnet flora

Linnet flora

 

Between two chords.

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I am lost between two chords

the mandolin is playing

you found me wand’ring somewhere

between the cello strains.

Standing between the willow

and the tanner’s brook

I just don’t have a reason

to take a backward look.

12 Comments

  1. the last line really is the grabber — I have no need to look backwards –

    really has me thinking — barbara

  2. heyy Barbara, it’s gone 2.30am here but I’ll visit tomorrow, hope you are well

  3. hey poet pretender :)

    favorite line in this one: you found me wand’ring somewhere

    between the cello strains.

  4. How often kevin when a nice time comes to an end people say ah well that’s the end, but we should be in anticipation enjoying still the good time we had and waiting for the next chord or strain. God bless you and your endeavours for social justice.

  5. “Between two chords”- great, Suz,:-). Words to stimulate the mind and soul.

  6. That’’s my friend Jane.

  7. I wonder if the chords are metaphors for the various milestones in life?

  8. The resonance of what has just ended and anticipation of the next, it’s a joyful sigh of pleasure

  9. good post,,
    walk walk and sing on my heart chord
    walk walk O best song in this world

  10. Hi ya, welcome to my bloggy, is that your song? :)

  11. Yeah, why should take a backward look if it just slows you down or make you cry…

  12. Hey :)


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