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You did not need a trumpet
nor the beating of a drum
to announce to you the sunrise
you knew that it had come.
You will not need a wind cock
or a weather man
to tell you when the north wind blows
he will make you know the plan.
I bethought to feed the sparrows
that squabbled on my lawn
instead I fed a sparrowhawk
aquiline and feathers tawn.
I began work with a ditty,
five lines became a score.
A door it seems had opened up
the more I wrote, they came the more.
Ideas came and I pulled them
like children pull a ribbon bow
of colours silk and pretty
the contents of a box to know.
I blew upon a dandelion
my thoughts flew into the air
heaven’s wind will carry them
to land and lay who knows where?
Now my thoughts and poems
will not eweryone please
some have found them delightful
to others they are a tease.
Standing in the rush hour
on the tube at Finsbury park
at the end of platform two
watching passengers embark
when I copped a lively one
from somewhere up above
that set the juices flowing
in another groove
I had seen the signalman beckon
heard the station master laugh
but the thunder in the tunnel
was a warning to the staff.
My transport is the rainbow
whose colours are my dreams
joined up they make the promise,
of life’s cascading streams.
I went down to the market place
to see what I could buy,
as I looked a little girl
just happed to catch my eye,
as she trailed behind her mum
a shiny red apple, I saw,
before her very nose had come
whose apple in the world could it be?
that it should plumb so level
by any law that she could see,
it belonged to her [and she had it.]
Who will clear my path of rocks?
to enable me,
who will put wheels to my chariot?
that I might speedy be.
Africa unite, swing wide the jewelled hinge.
Let loose the ties of Orion
you shall be the head and not the tail
leading out Arcturus and his sons each one.
Let your morning song
be a song of love
in the night a lullaby
I will keep it as my trove.
Let us take to the middle
of the silvery stream
with flow lapping against us, side by side,
willow applauding our happy scheme
My rhymes will keep you company
until your journey ends.
You and I are passengers,
we might as well be friends.
but if you pull a gritty one,
well, who am I to blame?
for cherries in a cherry bowl
will not always be the same.
I will fill your lap with roses
to fragrance your sojourn
pure white petalled, velvet reds
just be careful with my thorn.
Mango morning, peaches
come, let me share your coconut,
we will drink his milk together
behind the walnut hut.
Sunshine on our shoulders,
love’s kindness in your eyes.
Walnut planks ain’t got no splinters,
my love ain’t got no sighs.
Sing a song of palm trees
lay down by my side
I will always be your lady
love as long as wide.
Looking east, my slate goes west,
I throw it over my shoulder,
turn around, hop jump
I won’t make ten till I’m older.
Again I will wander in daisies and clover
I will make my music heard
in the acoustic sky
and lift my voice with the songbird.
Trees whisper at my coming
they call me by my name
all wave to me in welcome
this is why I came.
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are you open to feedback?
Do you mean criticism? yes I am , discussion, yes, but I’ve been to your page and see that we see things very differently, What have you in mind Kevin?
lol no worries- just on the poetry
phew, relief, yes fire away Kevin [I like that name very much] and I like people to be honest, I am not easily offended.
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Wow, this one takes you on such a journey! I think it would work well set to music.
lol dove how are you?
i must apologize that i forgot i posted this question on your thread and never replied.
by now whatever minor suggestion i had i have forgotten, or perhaps it improves with multiple readings? ^_^
take care!
kevin
Heyy it’s 3.00 am and frosty, I must really like you guys!
@BG big howdy to you there is a load of my stuff now that would make songs or songs could be extracted from, it’s always a plesh to see you, take care.
nice to see you Kevin. P.S. read poetry out loud poetically (while wearing frilly knickers) ho ho ho, it always sounds different then hehe. oh stoppit, I’ll never sleep now.
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And YOU take care Mr. Kevin I was just fishing out my boxing gloves, not really, my poetry nor my scribbles will never be perfect art, I submitted “Daffodils” to a really tip top poetry forum and this B.A. literature guy got hold of it gave it a tip and a bump with a little shake and just transformed it into something wonderful without changing the original concept a bit-I was awed. That’s what I mean by poet pretender
hi,
this is writings from bc, you can use this blog of mine, you will get every poem here which are in suryakana.
with warmest wishes,
I loved this poem, its long yet beautiful.
best wishes,
Hi Trish, not as long as “turgid” thank you so much for your kindness